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feedback needed

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 5:01 pm
by Gps
Hi guys

I would like to get some feedback. I wonder if the track needs something more ?

Should I go on the hunt for some chants ?

If anybody has any idea on how I can connect the first part more fluent into the second part ?

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/new-06

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 5:58 pm
by brandystarbrite
Wow! The start up of the music track sounded a bit 50's ish. Cool! 8-)

Nice bass sound.
Everything started off well.

Okay, it seems that, the nice synth sound at 31 sec to 2:08 secs, sounds a bit not in time, with the Bass melody which plays throughout the track.
It could be that the notes of the Synth sound which starts at 31 secs, are not placed on the piano roll correctly, to correspond, or go in time with the bass synth playing throughout your soundtrack.
Or, it might be out of pitch, with the bass sound of your sound track.

2:13 secs onward is good and sounds in sync and in tune with each other.

I have never done this before, but if you want, you could upload your project file, for this soundtrack you made, and I'll try my best to find out what is wrong.
If you do upload it, I'll check it out 2 or 3 hours from now and find out what the problem is, since I have to
go in the super market, buy and eat some foody. :P
Oh,....I should mention, I am using LMMS portable 1.1.3.

Note: These days, I am using an old Dell PC running XP, with only less than 1 GB of RAM memory. :cry:
And it can't really handle, any fancy 3rd party Vst plugins so well.
But so far Synth 1 works fine on this PC I'm using. :D
So hopefully, your project doesn't use any super fancy 3rd party Vst plugins, or tons of them. :)

Suggestion: From 2:13 onward, it would have been interesting, if you went higher up with the synth melody, during the end of the loop and then went down again once in a while, for variation.
But so far the Synth melody is very nice. :D

Note: This is a really nice, upbeating soundtrack you made.
But once we find out what the problem is, it'll sound, even more Awesomer!! :D

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 6:17 pm
by Gps
I hope it works, if it does not just tell me, I might be able to save a different version.

Second bass line is on purpose a bit behind the first beassline. ( 2 times 1/192)

https://lmms.io/lsp/?action=show&file=7627

Edit:


Synth1 soundbank Rob Rouleau number 8 pad or lead?

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 6:34 pm
by brandystarbrite
Okay, I just downloaded it Mr. Gps.
I'll check out your project file, in a while and see whats wrong.

But as I said before, so far your sound track sounds really cool and melodic. :)

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 12:17 am
by brandystarbrite
Hi Mr.Gps. 8-)

Okay, I'm getting some trouble loading it.
Okay, it loaded fine, but I got alot of Easy Q error messages?
Oh, Easy Q is an 3rd party Vst? Cool! I'll download Easy Q later.

Oh, I see that you used Synth 1 in your project. Cool!
Which preset are you using? Is it one of the default presets that come with Synth 1?

Okay, to make this easier, just give me the music track heard from 1 sec to 2:09 secs, in
your soundcloud version.

1) With the bass sounding melody, that plays from the start to finish in your songtrack.

2) And the Synth lead type plucky type melody, that plays in at 31 secs to 2:09 secs.

My parents, old PC will be very grateful, if you did that. :D
Because it can't handle so many automations and ZynaddsubFX's. :D
Synth1 soundbank Rob Rouleau number 8 pad or lead?
?
What's that?

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 12:19 am
by Gps
Fixed some mistakes on the synth1 track, that was prob the problem.

Wanted to have those bolow notes in between the above notes, but had clearly made a mistake.

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 12:21 am
by brandystarbrite
I re editted my comment above. ^

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 12:31 am
by Gps
Easy Q:
http://www.rs-met.com/freebies.html

I have a lot of extra soundbanks for synth1. The one I used in this track is Rob Rouleau dance.zip. number 8 is the preset I used. Its an arpeggio.
http://veryrandomstreams.blogspot.nl/20 ... -free.html

The bassline prob needs some work. Gonna look at that tomorrow.

I am gonna try if I can rit of easy Q and re upload the track.

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 12:45 am
by brandystarbrite
Fixed some mistakes on the synth1 track, that was prob the problem.

Wanted to have those bolow notes in between the above notes, but had clearly made a mistake.
Okay, nice. :D

Re: feedback needed

Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 12:46 am
by brandystarbrite
Gps wrote:Easy Q:
http://www.rs-met.com/freebies.html

I have a lot of extra soundbanks for synth1. The one I used in this track is Rob Rouleau dance.zip. number 8 is the preset I used. Its an arpeggio.
http://veryrandomstreams.blogspot.nl/20 ... -free.html

The bassline prob needs some work. Gonna look at that tomorrow.

I am gonna try if I can rit of easy Q and re upload the track.
Okay cool! :)
Thanks for those links Mr. Gps. :D
I'm gonna download Easy Q right now! :D