Allium's Music Topic

[Allium]

I'm tired and I don't know how to begin this post so

Yeah; I'm Allium

I'm gonna keep this kinda colloquial and say that I'm gonna drop (the bass) some of my sounds here. I've been making music for quite some time now, starting the moment I touched a piano and like 67 other instruments. I haven't been real open with my music to most people and I think now I could use some feedback.

Just go ahead and listen in on these links here, (these I feel exemplify my skill well) :
https://soundcloud.com/allium-3/crystal-wilderness
https://soundcloud.com/allium-3/allium-paper-lion
https://soundcloud.com/allium-3/sets/allium-castaway

There's your little taste of heaven. I am a girl and yes, that's me on vocals. I try

I'm working on vocal quality still, I'm gonna invest in an audio interface once I'm no longer broke. ;/

Thanks for taking the time to lend your ear and I hope you post a comment to tell me what you thought

Have a nice day

~Allium

[brandystarbrite]

Wow!
These sound like movie soundtracks.
Especially the first two.

Crystal Wilderness sounds really awesome. I love the piano keys used in it. Nice vocals too.
It sounds like it's made for a Barbarian type/adventure type movie.

Paper Lion sounds like action sequence music.
A Lion roar in an asian sounding techno sounding song?
Wow! Never thought I would have heard that in long time.
But I know they did stuff something like that, back in the Jarre and Skaven days.
And you ended the music with a Lion growling? Cool!
Strange, I get a Kung Fu Panda type vibe from listening to this soundtrack.

Castaway is interesting.
The low volume distant sounding echoing vocals and far away echoing sounding music melodies, used in this soundtrack, suit this type of soundtrack well. It sounds very haunting too.
Fantastic voice you have, for this music track.
Your voice really suits this song well!
You even sang in time, with the music and melodies too.
Strangely, this might sound strange, but this Castaway tune, sounds like something,
that Estonian singer Kerli might sing.

They all sound really Great!
A job well done Allium.
You voice is very lovely. Fantastic voice you have! Lovely vocals!!

But my favourite is the Paper Lion song. Ha! Ha!

[musikbear]

impressive vocals!
Crystal and Castaway are for me the best track, but you are obvious a person that knows music (i suspect its you in the picture with the violin too :)
You are very welcome to the Forum, and i hope you will help with all the subjects around music-theory :)
If you like more peeps to hear your music, theres always the lmms group on soundcloud:)
https://soundcloud.com/groups/lmms

[Gps]

I like castaway.

Great job on all three though.

[The Chill Fox]

listened to crystal wilderness - I felt an anime vibe from it. Idk why... but man it's awesome
"Oh, this stuff is pretty good. I'll check out paper lion."
*Starts with growl and synth*
"Ohhh shit this is goooood. Odd but really lovely and melodic."
"That was a satisfying song, I'm gonna check Castaway"
*Listens to the beginning percussion and vocals*
"HOoooollyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy f*ck this is gooooooooooooooooooooooood..... o.o"
Seriously, your vocals are very strong and stable and perfect for castaway! And your taste for synth and how you blend it together reminds me A LOT of one of my favorite artists (Veorra).
Oh please oh please make more music. You have such talent and we really hope you enjoy your time here on LMMS

[Allium]

Thank you guys so much for this feedback! It helps a TON to know what other people think, because then it's not all just me thinking about this. I need the fresh perspectives.

I also love how everyone got different vibes from the songs. The anime feel is something that was unexpected, since I don't really watch that much anime. I do love some of the theme songs for those shows, though, because they have a type of rare energy you can't find anywhere else.

But I'm glad (like, uber glad) that you guys like it!!!!!

[Rakso]

Cool!
I can't decide decide wheather I like crystal wilderness or castaway more. Maybe crystal wilderness is better because of the feeling of "adventure" it kinda conveys (would fit in a videogame imo). Paper lion is also great, and I like the oriental vibe it has to it. The sound in it is maybe not as "clear" as the sound in your newer songs. All in all they're all really good anyway.