This is a pretty neat idea, musician commentary on his own musictracks. Cool!
At one time, years back, (when my laptop was working)I was thinking of doing something like this, for my music, which I planned to release on soundcloud.
But moreso for videogames, I was planning to make.
I think alot of LMMS users and musicians, who have released music on the internet, should take notes from this, and follow this example, once in a while.
But as Gps said, in some parts, when the music plays, I couldn't hear you so clearly, because the music literally overpowered your voice. And this is understandable, since what you did, is not easy to do.
The same thing goes for music making tutorials.
But all in all, this "music track commentary," was a neat idea Mr. musikbear.
Lead the way!!
sorry