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Magenta, Help wanted

Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2016 1:32 pm
by mrlmmsguy
Here is my newest track for the masses to burn massive amounts of calories to. Or just chill and play videogames with. Not judging https://soundcloud.com/mrlmmsguy/magenta
I'm looking for ways to improve this track and my all-around sound, so feel free to roast me in the comments. Help is not needed but would be appreciated. God bless and good day!

Re: Magenta, Help needed

Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2016 1:48 am
by brandystarbrite
This is a really good track. :)
Really interesting use of synths, sounds and sound effects etc.

I see that someone on soundcloud, spoke about the drums.
The drums sound really nice, but somehow, need a bit more power in them. :)

Re: Magenta, Help needed

Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2016 3:18 pm
by Snarf
This is a pretty good dubstep track, especially for LMMS. You did a good job with the dubstep sound effects and overall feel with the rhythm; it's definitely a solid bass. I agree with the need for a stronger kick, and I'm going to take that a bit further and say that the low end in general is pretty weak. You could boost it with EQ, but a better fix would just be to add a sub bass or modify your basses so they have some weight in the 60-150 Hz region (same with the kick).

Re: Magenta, Help needed

Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2016 10:59 pm
by mrlmmsguy
Thanks, Snarf and Brandy, something I'm still wondering about is the composition in itself, I feel like my melodic transitions aren't always musical and that the drops are missing something in their structure. But maybe I'm just being hypercritical.