Semi-new song, "LA v.2"

[Michal34]

So I've had this song on my soundcloud that I've been sort of unsatisfied with, and I finally had the inspiration to fix it. I would like your guy's critique. Also, what do you guys think of me getting rid of the original song? I kinda feel that it's a waste of space, I would like your advice on that.

Link: https://soundcloud.com/michael-cruz-85/la-v2

[musikbear]

I marked 2 places in your track
'1' is actually for the whole track: Did you intend to be off-key, cause im almost sure you are. What key and scale have you used?

2) Here there is a tiny click on i believe the release, just change that a few ms, and it will be gone.

[Michal34]

'1' is actually for the whole track: Did you intend to be off-key, cause im almost sure you are. What key and scale have you used?

I didn't intend to be off-key, though I have to say I don't really know what key Is. I've said before, I'm pretty new to lmms, and I don't even have anything like a midi keyboard or anything, I just use a normal keyboard abd mouse. As it stands, my only music experience is in me learning to play trombone in middle school a few years back, though I'm hoping to get piano lessons and eventually a midi keyboard.

[musikbear]

my only music experience is in me learning to play trombone in middle school a few years back, though I'm hoping to get piano lessons and eventually a midi keyboard.

And they did not teach you about scales and keys?
I have made some tutorials, that explains music-theory. Perhaps they can be useful.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEgx-_hMFYg

https://lmms.io/wiki/index.php?title=Co ... ding_music

[Michal34]

my only music experience is in me learning to play trombone in middle school a few years back, though I'm hoping to get piano lessons and eventually a midi keyboard.

And they did not teach you about scales and keys?
I have made some tutorials, that explains music-theory. Perhaps they can be useful.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEgx-_hMFYg

Thank you!