New song!

[Torvonic]

Hey guys! I have been using LMMS for about 4 months and have been working hard on using and getting used to all of the features. This is my latest song and I was wondering If I could get some feedback so I could know what I can do better.

https://soundcloud.com/torvonic/fused

[Gideon Stephen]

Although I'm not a huge fan of this type of music, I have to say that you did an excellent job on this song. I don't have much else to say, but you earned another follower. I like the cover picture too.
I've had LMMS for about 4 months too, but I only started using it a lot about a month ago, so I'm still learning, so... I can't really tell you how you can do better...

Hey guys! I have been using LMMS for about 4 months and have been working hard on using and getting used to all of the features. This is my latest song and I was wondering If I could get some feedback so I could know what I can do better.

https://soundcloud.com/torvonic/fused

[brandystarbrite]

This is a cool 80's sounding techno track.
Really nice synth sounds, musical melodies and special effects.
I like that wobble sound from 2:24 to 2:27 secs.

I was going to suggest, to make the kick drum sound, a tiny bit louder.
But personally, it sounds good the way it is, in this music track.

Lovely music.
Love the melodies.
Also, cool cover art dude.