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I'm fairly new to all of this (A couple months of experience). I wanted to feedback on a song I just finished.

https://soundcloud.com/djvoid-official/ ... dawn-final

Any advice or feedback? Thanks

Hey there, welcome to forums!
Your song is pretty sick! But a bit too loud.
I like the wubs and the leads.
The only complaint I have is that the drums are kind of quiet.

SonicSpeed wrote:Hey there, welcome to forums!
Your song is pretty sick! But a bit too loud.
I like the wubs and the leads.
The only complaint I have is that the drums are kind of quiet.

Yeah I was kind of thinking the same actually, working on fixing that right now. But yeah thanks man I appreciate it

DJ Void wrote:

SonicSpeed wrote:Hey there, welcome to forums!
Your song is pretty sick! But a bit too loud.
I like the wubs and the leads.
The only complaint I have is that the drums are kind of quiet.

Yeah I was kind of thinking the same actually, working on fixing that right now. But yeah thanks man I appreciate it

Any time, mate.

DJ Void wrote:I'm fairly new to all of this (A couple months of experience). I wanted to feedback on a song I just finished.

https://soundcloud.com/djvoid-official/ ... dawn-final

Any advice or feedback? Thanks

If that's just after a couple months... Then you sir, are a prodigy of sorts. Sounds great, although there was some clipping going on and I felt like all the different musical layers did not match in key. That's a lot of raw talent going on there. I'd just recommend that you expand your sound and preset library. Curmudgeons like me might bawl you out if they keep hearing LMMS's native stuff.
God Bless and good day

Well, the guys beat me to it. You got alot of good advice already.

This is one unusual track. I would put this music track in another category. A surreal mix of dubstep and other genres.
The last time, I heard music similar to this style, was from another Lmms user years ago.
Who made tracks, almost similar to this style.
I like the start up from 0 to 18 secs. The rest of it is cool.

I noticed that the pitches, of some of the melodies/synth sounds, don't quite match each other.

I will admit, this was fun yet enjoyable to listen too.
Very surreal and good use of synth sounds dude.
You got hidden skillz.

mrlmmsguy wrote:

DJ Void wrote:I'm fairly new to all of this (A couple months of experience). I wanted to feedback on a song I just finished.

https://soundcloud.com/djvoid-official/ ... dawn-final

Any advice or feedback? Thanks

If that's just after a couple months... Then you sir, are a prodigy of sorts. Sounds great, although there was some clipping going on and I felt like all the different musical layers did not match in key. That's a lot of raw talent going on there. I'd just recommend that you expand your sound and preset library. Curmudgeons like me might bawl you out if they keep hearing LMMS's native stuff.
God Bless and good day

Well I'm not new to music by any means. I've played guitar and piano since I was 11 (Am 23 now) And I know my theory pretty well. Just new to making EDM. Thanks for the feed back. The songs about half presets, and half original sounds, so the off key sounds your hearing is probably poorly done saws by yours truly. I apreciate the advice and I'll do my best to apply it.

brandystarbrite wrote:Well, the guys beat me to it. You got alot of good advice already.

This is one unusual track. I would put this music track in another category. A surreal mix of dubstep and other genres.
The last time, I heard music similar to this style, was from another Lmms user years ago.
Who made tracks, almost similar to this style.
I like the start up from 0 to 18 secs. The rest of it is cool.

I noticed that the pitches, of some of the melodies/synth sounds, don't quite match each other.

I will admit, this was fun yet enjoyable to listen too.
Very surreal and good use of synth sounds dude.
You got hidden skillz.

Thanks for the feedback man, it's greatly appreciated. And yeah I have a lot of influence coming in from Happy Hardcore artists such as S3rl and I'm sure you can hear the influence in my songs. Glad you enjoyed it to the extent that you did man.

Thanks

I like the music especially the parts that has a similarity to the beginning of it. I never heard before about something dark... in the dubstep way. Keep it up.