Trapped (First attempt at Trap)

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Any critique is welcome. Need to know what things to change and what not.
All I can say is that it was a good listen but if you were to change something for next time maybe a little less repetetive, try a little more variance... I enjoyed it though.!
Jogden139 wrote:All I can say is that it was a good listen but if you were to change something for next time maybe a little less repetetive, try a little more variance... I enjoyed it though.!
Okay, will add more variety. Thanks!
Good track.
After 35 secs, I hear a change in pitch. ACYDE caught on to it too.
It seems, the other guys beat me to giving you advice. So I have not much to say. Lol!
A bit more variation in the melody and you're good.
Nice track though.
brandystarbrite wrote:Good track.
After 35 secs, I hear a change in pitch. ACYDE caught on to it too.
It seems, the other guys beat me to giving you advice. So I have not much to say. Lol!
A bit more variation in the melody and you're good.
Nice track though.
Okay, thanks!
Yeah. I will start by saying I've been classifying this genre (and making it) for a while now.
I'd say that the melody is pretty good, except an 808 is needed for the genre to be legit ;)

Anyway, overall a pretty good track. Just not necessarily trap... yet.
Leche wrote:Yeah. I will start by saying I've been classifying this genre (and making it) for a while now.
I'd say that the melody is pretty good, except an 808 is needed for the genre to be legit ;)

Anyway, overall a pretty good track. Just not necessarily trap... yet.
Okay, got it. Some 808 kicks and it will be trap, right?
Yes. Just make sure it's still a trap beat, but that part you got covered ;)
Leche wrote:Yes. Just make sure it's still a trap beat, but that part you got covered ;)
Hehe, got it. :P
Good luck bro :)