Trouble in Candyland (feedback appreciated)

[mrlmmsguy]

My favorite song of mine! HAHAHAHAAH.Some questions though: too many grace notes in the drums? not enough bass? Is this a ripoff? Do I ask too many questions?
https://soundcloud.com/mrlmmsguy/trouble-in-candyland
God Bless and good day

[brandystarbrite]

I admit, this is one unusual track, with lots of unusual sounds.
That voice growl sound is unique.
You definitely have the dubstep part, down really good though.
The title and the cover art, both fit this track well.
As for the cover art, it is hilarious, in a good way.
It also asks, alot of questions.
Why is the square candy crying? And why are the other two, looking so concerned? Lol!

Nice work.

[Snarf]

Ha, this is my favorite one of yours. Nice beat, keep it up!

[Cubbyk]

Nice sound design! I really like your vocal-like growls and the drop was really fun. I really enjoyed this one, i think it's probably my favorite of your tracks so far too. I would have used more bass, but maybe thats because i live too much in the low end. Haha. Great work. Keep it up.

[mrlmmsguy]

. I would have used more bass, .

Yeah, you might have noticed the sub in the drop, but I didn't put in the verses because I didn't have a really good idea of what to do with it that was different. I might make a VIP though

As for the cover art, it is hilarious, in a good way.

Thanks! It took all of the blood, sweat, and tears of twenty or so minutes to make. hee hee. I came up with the title because the old video game lead had minor key changes. So a typically happy sounding thing had an ominous ring to it.

Ha, this is my favorite one of yours. Nice beat, keep it up!

Thank you sir. I was wondering if I should have added more breaks. Maybe in the VIP.
Thanks for the feedback all!
God Bless and good day

[brandystarbrite]

I had to listen to it again.

[inersha]

New to the forum, came here for some inspiration. I think I've listened to this song about 20 times now.

How do you make the sound that kicks in at 0:56?

[Jogden139]

SO RAD! Great job man!! I cant believe the finesse and control with the dubby stuff, i mean how do you automate things so perfectly? I gotta play this again because... Do you give lessons? I just fell in love with the talker basses..