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Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2016 5:22 pm
by SonicSpeed
https://soundcloud.com/maximum-official ... ap-project
Any critique is welcome. Need to know what things to change and what not.
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2016 5:44 am
by Jogden139
All I can say is that it was a good listen but if you were to change something for next time maybe a little less repetetive, try a little more variance... I enjoyed it though.!
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2016 11:13 am
by SonicSpeed
Jogden139 wrote:All I can say is that it was a good listen but if you were to change something for next time maybe a little less repetetive, try a little more variance... I enjoyed it though.!
Okay, will add more variety. Thanks!
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2016 12:48 am
by brandystarbrite
Good track.
After 35 secs, I hear a change in pitch. ACYDE caught on to it too.
It seems, the other guys beat me to giving you advice. So I have not much to say. Lol!
A bit more variation in the melody and you're good.
Nice track though.
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2016 10:57 am
by SonicSpeed
brandystarbrite wrote:Good track.
After 35 secs, I hear a change in pitch. ACYDE caught on to it too.
It seems, the other guys beat me to giving you advice. So I have not much to say. Lol!
A bit more variation in the melody and you're good.
Nice track though.
Okay, thanks!
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2016 4:31 pm
by Leche
Yeah. I will start by saying I've been classifying this genre (and making it) for a while now.
I'd say that the melody is pretty good, except an 808 is needed for the genre to be legit
Anyway, overall a pretty good track. Just not necessarily trap... yet.
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2016 11:06 pm
by SonicSpeed
Leche wrote:Yeah. I will start by saying I've been classifying this genre (and making it) for a while now.
I'd say that the melody is pretty good, except an 808 is needed for the genre to be legit
Anyway, overall a pretty good track. Just not necessarily trap... yet.
Okay, got it. Some 808 kicks and it will be trap, right?
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2016 11:19 pm
by Leche
Yes. Just make sure it's still a trap beat, but that part you got covered
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2016 1:27 pm
by SonicSpeed
Leche wrote:Yes. Just make sure it's still a trap beat, but that part you got covered
Hehe, got it.
Re: Trapped (First attempt at Trap)
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2016 10:42 pm
by Leche
Good luck bro
