Falling kingdom-HRZ

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Hi i just released my new song!
https://soundcloud.com/user-278311827/f ... ingdom-hrz
What do you think guys? Pls give me some advice, so i can improve!
Falling kingdom is a good track.
The game inspired cover art is nice too.

From 5 secs to 7 secs, the background arab sounding synth melody, gets abruptly loud.
Use automation to make it slowly go/ease from soft to loud. 8-)
From 20 to 28 secs, is another good example of of too much clipping and it gets abruptly loud.

3:23 to 3:25 secs, the same arab sounding synth sound, gets abruptly loud after a while.
3:35 to 3:37 secs is another good example of that again.

30 to 55 secs, raise the volume on that synth sound. It sounds a bit too quiet.

The hihat sound, you used in this track, sounds a bit too hard.
Add a bit of reverb and tweak the dials on it, to your hearts content.

The drum roll from 2:00 to 2:08 secs is good, but it seems to skip/glitch a note half way through it,
breaking the cool build up feel of it.

From 2:10 onward, the cool back ground melody synth sound, sounds a bit too soft. raise the volume a bit.

2:08 onward has a nice bass melody. Very well done. :)

3:36 to 3:42 secs nice build up. :)

Despite some of these problems, I must agree, it is a cool sounding track. :D
I like it, other than the abrupt high-volume changes like brandy mentioned... pretty good job sir!
brandystarbrite wrote:Falling kingdom is a good track.
The game inspired cover art is nice too.

From 5 secs to 7 secs, the background arab sounding synth melody, gets abruptly loud.
Use automation to make it slowly go/ease from soft to loud. 8-)
From 20 to 28 secs, is another good example of of too much clipping and it gets abruptly loud.

3:23 to 3:25 secs, the same arab sounding synth sound, gets abruptly loud after a while.
3:35 to 3:37 secs is another good example of that again.

30 to 55 secs, raise the volume on that synth sound. It sounds a bit too quiet.

The hihat sound, you used in this track, sounds a bit too hard.
Add a bit of reverb and tweak the dials on it, to your hearts content.

The drum roll from 2:00 to 2:08 secs is good, but it seems to skip/glitch a note half way through it,
breaking the cool build up feel of it.

From 2:10 onward, the cool back ground melody synth sound, sounds a bit too soft. raise the volume a bit.

2:08 onward has a nice bass melody. Very well done. :)

3:36 to 3:42 secs nice build up. :)

Despite some of these problems, I must agree, it is a cool sounding track. :D



HRZees: brandybrite! I use mac! I dont know why i cant use automation track!
Now i just uploaded my new song its called human races! https://soundcloud.com/user-278311827/human-races-hrz
Please tell me what i need to do in the next song! :D