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New track, constructive criticism please,.. or any other thoughts/comments are welcomed!
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-og ... -fly-pests

Jogden139 wrote:New track, constructive criticism please,.. or any other thoughts/comments are welcomed!
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-og ... -fly-pests

Melodies seem very out of tune with one another. And there doesn't seem to be a structure to the rhythm of it or anything. You need to work on learning about 1. song structure. And 2. scales.

DJ Void wrote:

Jogden139 wrote:New track, constructive criticism please,.. or any other thoughts/comments are welcomed!
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-og ... -fly-pests

Melodies seem very out of tune with one another. And there doesn't seem to be a structure to the rhythm of it or anything. You need to work on learning about 1. song structure. And 2. scales.

yeah i think song structure is my major weakness.

Jogden139 wrote:New track, constructive criticism please,.. or any other thoughts/comments are welcomed!
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-og ... -fly-pests

This sounds like a mad mash mix, with a bit of a Jungle sound and vibe to it.
Similar to what some Jazz musicians, do in their tracks sometimes.

I must admit, that in certain parts of the track, the melodies seem out of sync, with each other.
Nice river cover art pic.

brandystarbrite wrote:

Jogden139 wrote:New track, constructive criticism please,.. or any other thoughts/comments are welcomed!
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-og ... -fly-pests

This sounds like a mad mash mix, with a bit of a Jungle sound and vibe to it.
Similar to what some Jazz musicians, do in their tracks sometimes.

I must admit, that in certain parts of the track, the melodies seem out of sync, with each other.
Nice river cover art pic.

Thanks for the compliment on my photography! I am unfamiliar with a mad mash mix, I'm not a big jazz fan... my melodies are probably out of sync i have a hard time having them flow together

Jogden139 wrote:I am unfamiliar with a mad mash mix, I'm not a big jazz fan...

Mad mash mix, Nah, that's what I call any music, where lots of instruments and sounds are playing together,
in sync, or mixed up all over the place.
Believe me when I say, I'm not a Jazz fan either.
But I like the Jazz music, in the Donkey Kong games though.

Jogden139 wrote:my melodies are probably out of sync i have a hard time having them flow together

Many musicians go through that problem. So don't worry.