My first LMMS track.

[Mordecai Music]

Hiya, Mordecai here.
Decided to give LMMS a try, since my friend recommended it, and here is the result:
https://soundcloud.com/mordecai-official/spectrum
Hope ya will like it and also, would appreciate some critique if the music is either crap or decent.

[Mordecai Music]

No replies so far.

[brandystarbrite]

Good track dude.

It could be my imagination, but I think you detuned the melody synth, a bit too much.

My other suggestion, would be, to either bring back the piano melody, or add in a new melody,
a bit past half way, through the song. Doing that, might make the track longer and make the song less repetitive.
Then bring back the original synth melody, and let it play onward.

I noticed that from, 2:30 to 2:45 secs, is a nice, stop the melody and bring it back again trick.
That's very cool.

All in all, good track, with lots of potential.

[Snarf]

All in all, good track, with lots of potential.

I second this. I would add some sidechain compression in the pad synth at the drop, and I would add some more percussion to your buildups. Great job, especially for your first track!

[Mordecai Music]

Good track dude.

It could be my imagination, but I think you detuned the melody synth, a bit too much.

My other suggestion, would be, to either bring back the piano melody, or add in a new melody,
a bit past half way, through the song. Doing that, might make the track longer and make the song less repetitive.
Then bring back the original synth melody, and let it play onward.

I noticed that from, 2:30 to 2:45 secs, is a nice, stop the melody and bring it back again trick.
That's very cool.

All in all, good track, with lots of potential.

All in all, good track, with lots of potential.

I second this. I would add some sidechain compression in the pad synth at the drop, and I would add some more percussion to your buildups. Great job, especially for your first track!

Holy crap, didn't expect people to like it. Glad you liked it a lot!
And yeah, I will add some. Thanks for the tips!

[mrlmmsguy]

Man, if this is your starting point, your going to have some serious stuff in the future. Good job!

[Mordecai Music]

Man, if this is your starting point, your going to have some serious stuff in the future. Good job!

Thanks! I was inspired by such artists as Martin Garrix, Avicii and Alan Walker slightly.