New Trash: "Egregious"

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https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-ogden/egregious
I'd like to see what people think of this egregiousness, don't be shy, play and comment away! :!:
I got quite tickled from the tittle 'trash' cause im 'working' on a trash song. Its however metal-trash, so its very different. and -speaking of different, brings me back to your track :p
Honestly, first i hastily lowered my dB output, then i saw you self had deemed the piece UN-listenable, so i did not feel it was wrong to follow your lead :)

Well saying something constructive: Wow for some growls and grunts and snearrs you have made! They are truly impressive, but dub-trash(?) is not reaching my xmas list.
musikbear wrote:I got quite tickled from the tittle 'trash' cause im 'working' on a trash song. Its however metal-trash, so its very different. and -speaking of different, brings me back to your track :p
Honestly, first i hastily lowered my dB output, then i saw you self had deemed the piece UN-listenable, so i did not feel it was wrong to follow your lead :)

Well saying something constructive: Wow for some growls and grunts and snearrs you have made! They are truly impressive, but dub-trash(?) is not reaching my xmas list.
LOL dub-trash I like that :mrgreen: Thanks for your input musikbear!
musikbear wrote:dub-trash(?)
Dub-trash? Wooah!
Now I agree with Jogden, that's an interesting name, for a genre of music. 8-)

@Jogden Aside from the volume issues in Egregious:
With a good bit of improvement, this track might be a good recommended one, in the not so distant future. :)
The start up from 0 to 24 secs was good though.
Reminds me of Otto Von Schirach, actually. Lot of ambient echos with distorted (rather than granular) drums, with a raw dub vocal bass. Listen to an album like Maxipad Detention and you'll find he uses FL slayer in the same manner. Early albums he was really big on gritty percussion and weird boing effects.

But ya man you got something interesting going there. Try and develop a bit stronger an idea, because I think ambience is good, but like any other creative effect, too much can detract from a listener's attention span
duderino wrote:Reminds me of Otto Von Schirach, actually. Lot of ambient echos with distorted (rather than granular) drums, with a raw dub vocal bass. Listen to an album like Maxipad Detention and you'll find he uses FL slayer in the same manner. Early albums he was really big on gritty percussion and weird boing effects.

But ya man you got something interesting going there. Try and develop a bit stronger an idea, because I think ambience is good, but like any other creative effect, too much can detract from a listener's attention span
Solid feedback thanks, I think you are right.