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https://soundcloud.com/maximum-official/midnight
Need some critisism. Thanks in advance.

SonicSpeed wrote:https://soundcloud.com/maximum-official/midnight
Need some critisism. Thanks in advance.

i really like this! i like what you did at the 1:14 mark and 1:28 mark and again somewhere else. but i think the melody could have come in a bit different. seems a bit forced. also, weird snap clap noise at the very start of song, may be a artifact from exporting.

Good job.

DJ FlyingPankakez wrote:

SonicSpeed wrote:https://soundcloud.com/maximum-official/midnight
Need some critisism. Thanks in advance.

i really like this! i like what you did at the 1:14 mark and 1:28 mark and again somewhere else. but i think the melody could have come in a bit different. seems a bit forced. also, weird snap clap noise at the very start of song, may be a artifact from exporting.

Good job.

Might be. Although, thanks for the critisism.

Sounds nice.
I like the cover art. Very fantastic moon/comet/stars night pic.

DJ FlyingPankakez wrote:but i think the melody could have come in a bit different. seems a bit forced.

Is it the part between 59 secs to 1:01 secs?

brandystarbrite wrote:Sounds nice.
I like the cover art. Very fantastic moon/comet/stars night pic.

DJ FlyingPankakez wrote:but i think the melody could have come in a bit different. seems a bit forced.

Is it the part between 59 secs to 1:01 secs?

Thanks a lot.

brandystarbrite wrote:Sounds nice.
I like the cover art. Very fantastic moon/comet/stars night pic.

DJ FlyingPankakez wrote:but i think the melody could have come in a bit different. seems a bit forced.

Is it the part between 59 secs to 1:01 secs?

The part between the 15 and 20 secs

Nice one buddy!

solid track, thanks for sharing!

B4CKW4RD wrote:Nice one buddy!

Jogden139 wrote:solid track, thanks for sharing!

Thanks.