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I think I must have pulled this one off in record time, anyways it's sort of like my typical jammed up mess of clashing sounds, sort of..
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-ogden/jto-so-tight

So please leave comments/likes, I'd love to see your opinion of the song unbiased, good or bad, constructive criticism is welcomed and in fact encouraged.. just dont tell me theres clipping because I've made sure there are none of that!

Jogden139 wrote:I think I must have pulled this one off in record time, anyways it's sort of like my typical jammed up mess of clashing sounds, sort of..
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-ogden/jto-so-tight

So please leave comments/likes, I'd love to see your opinion of the song unbiased, good or bad, constructive criticism is welcomed and in fact encouraged.. just dont tell me theres clipping because I've made sure there are none of that!

Hm, starts off pretty good! But after that it uh...train wrecks. I'm sorry for being harsh, but that's kinda what happened. The notes were off tune, percussion was odd, but mostly the notes being out of tune.

Also, take your time with making music.

DJ FlyingPankakez wrote:

Jogden139 wrote:I think I must have pulled this one off in record time, anyways it's sort of like my typical jammed up mess of clashing sounds, sort of..
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-ogden/jto-so-tight

So please leave comments/likes, I'd love to see your opinion of the song unbiased, good or bad, constructive criticism is welcomed and in fact encouraged.. just dont tell me theres clipping because I've made sure there are none of that!

Hm, starts off pretty good! But after that it uh...train wrecks. I'm sorry for being harsh, but that's kinda what happened. The notes were off tune, percussion was odd, but mostly the notes being out of tune.

Also, take your time with making music.

Yeah solid advice thanks.

The start up is nice.
But after a while, the out of sync/tune notes, brings this track down a bit.

It has potential, but in comparison to your recent track progress, and a few past tracks that sounded
good enough, this one So Tight, needs to be improved a good bit.

My suggestion, is whenever you have time, remake this track.
Nice work though.