Bells of hope

[amadeusmax]

This is more of a pop song mix compared to the others in this forum. Its not my first in LMMS but I do not have many.

https://soundcloud.com/bryan-williams-8 ... ls-of-hope

Looking for ideas to improve as this is a learning experiment for me.

[DJ FlyingPankakez]

This is more of a pop song mix compared to the others in this forum. Its not my first in LMMS but I do not have many.

https://soundcloud.com/bryan-williams-8 ... ls-of-hope

Looking for ideas to improve as this is a learning experiment for me.

Pretty cool! I like the happy ish feeling it gives with the bells. Though, hi hats were a tad loud, and at about the 1:45 mark it gets off tune, though I like what you were trying to do at that part, it happens again later in the song.

Two thumbs up!

[brandystarbrite]

This is more of a pop song mix compared to the others in this forum. Its not my first in LMMS but I do not have many.

https://soundcloud.com/bryan-williams-8 ... ls-of-hope

Looking for ideas to improve as this is a learning experiment for me.

I agree with DJ FlyingPankakez. The Hihats are a bit to hard and loud sounding.

But like DJ FlyingPankakez, I myself noticed, that at 1:45 secs, is that drum/snare sounding
instrument off tune?

But overall, nice joyful uplifting music.