(Yifwen) Two New songs! A rap and a Uke song.

[The Chill Fox]

ayyy guys! just to let you know, I released two new songs on my www.soundcloud.com/yifwen account
My Ukulele song that I wrote and sung myself:
https://soundcloud.com/yifwen/yifwen-holding-hands
My rap song, produced by autumn keys:
https://soundcloud.com/yifwen/stress-prod-autumn-keys

[Leche]

Hey! Pretty good! One thing I will criticize about Stress is that it's a bit too quiet.

Nice uke skills bruh.

[brandystarbrite]

Nice rapping dude. And the music goes along well with it.
But after a while, the music kinda overpowers and drowns out, what you're singing.
An easy way to solve this, is lowering the volume of all of the instruments a bit, so your rapping
can be heard clearer.
It seems that volume balance, in a few of your tracks is the only problem. So not much worries there.
And you already did, a good job with the volume, on many of your previous songs.

The Holding hands Uke song is nice.
Now all we need, is a sunset evening beach, filled with people and lots of cool drinks and plenty food.

[The Chill Fox]

thanks for the feedback! Glad you guys liked my ukulele song
Also, about Stress...

Consider it done, I fixed up the volume, re-listen

[brandystarbrite]

thanks for the feedback! Glad you guys liked my ukulele song

It's really nice.

Also, about Stress...

Consider it done, I fixed up the volume, re-listen

Sounds much better and your rapping is clearer and easier to hear now. Good work.

If you want, lower the instruments a tiny bit more.
Yer getting close. Almost there.

[mrlmmsguy]

I think your voice editing could be better. It sounds like you're trying to do it in one take, It's better to do a couple, and if you goof, you can fix it with it a word from another. This is called "comping". I'd also recommend working on some more complex rhymes. But I gotta hand it to you, I would not have to the courage to put my early stuff out for the public to see. So props to you.
I made a track to demonstrate some stuff and to sorta show off. Don't mind me
https://soundcloud.com/mayostaccato/32-for-fun

[The Chill Fox]

ayy thanks man! That really helps

[mrlmmsguy]

Your welcome.