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November 24th, 2016, 3:02 pm
Nice work. And the melody is cool too.
Advice:
The track starts off a bit too abruptly, with that piano synth sound.
Leave some quiet space eg.
4 secs, before the track actually starts, then, let the piano melody play
and introduce the track.
From
1:20 to 1:27 secs, that synth in the background, sounds out of tune/key, with the nice piano synth.
I suggest moving the notes in the piano roll, or find out, which notes are out of tune with the piano music.
Good work so far though.