Raven

[darkmagi250]

Another song I made in LMMS. It has a dance/rave feel. Tell me what you guys think.

https://soundcloud.com/darkmagi250/raven

[brandystarbrite]

Wooah.
This is fast and I like how it sounds.
This might be too fast for some people. But then again, I have heard rave type tracks, a slight bit faster than this.
It really does remind me, of fast old school rave music. Ha! Ha!

[ACYDE Music]

You got a really nice beat here
In my opinion a really fast and varied track. In my opinion you could add a little bit more melody.
You should also have some parts of the melody always in background when only the beat is playing (for that
lowpass the instruments to get the feeling of a little "break")
also you could improve your mixing, watch some youtube tutorials from cubician and other youtubers out there
You did a good job on this track!

[Snarf]

Great dance track. The only thing it's missing is some good bass

[darkmagi250]

You got a really nice beat here
In my opinion a really fast and varied track. In my opinion you could add a little bit more melody.
You should also have some parts of the melody always in background when only the beat is playing (for that
lowpass the instruments to get the feeling of a little "break")
also you could improve your mixing, watch some youtube tutorials from cubician and other youtubers out there
You did a good job on this track!

Thanks for the feedback, I'll take a look at those tutorial videos, and take your own advice.