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Raven

Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2016 8:45 pm
by darkmagi250
Another song I made in LMMS. It has a dance/rave feel. Tell me what you guys think. :D

https://soundcloud.com/darkmagi250/raven

Re: Raven

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2016 3:06 am
by brandystarbrite
Wooah.
This is fast and I like how it sounds. :D
This might be too fast for some people. But then again, I have heard rave type tracks, a slight bit faster than this. :)
It really does remind me, of fast old school rave music. Ha! Ha! :D

Re: Raven

Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2016 8:22 pm
by ACYDE Music
You got a really nice beat here :)
In my opinion a really fast and varied track. In my opinion you could add a little bit more melody.
You should also have some parts of the melody always in background when only the beat is playing (for that
lowpass the instruments to get the feeling of a little "break")
also you could improve your mixing, watch some youtube tutorials from cubician and other youtubers out there :)
You did a good job on this track!

Re: Raven

Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2016 4:13 am
by Snarf
Great dance track. The only thing it's missing is some good bass :)

Re: Raven

Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2016 7:42 pm
by darkmagi250
ACYDE Music wrote:You got a really nice beat here :)
In my opinion a really fast and varied track. In my opinion you could add a little bit more melody.
You should also have some parts of the melody always in background when only the beat is playing (for that
lowpass the instruments to get the feeling of a little "break")
also you could improve your mixing, watch some youtube tutorials from cubician and other youtubers out there :)
You did a good job on this track!
Thanks for the feedback, I'll take a look at those tutorial videos, and take your own advice. :)