[Rap] couple of things [explicit]

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hey guys, sorry I haven't been making raps often... well I have written a lot but laziness gets the best of me.
this is just something for me to vent about. at least two times in this rap I mention that I know I didn't count and have a syllable/rhyme scheme... This is just for me to vent. An upcoming rap has some tho :)
anyways, here is my song:
www.soundcloud.com/yifwen/things
and check out this dope ass producer who made the beat:
www.soundcloud.com/shibuya-san
thanks :)
I read and understood everything you wrote. So I wouldn't say much.
The Chill Fox wrote:This is just for me to vent. An upcoming rap has some tho :)
Yep. Venting is good for mind and soul. Dr. Brandy's prescription. :geek:

That beat is sick, especially when it's accompanied with your lyrics.
Good work to shibuya-san and to the both of you. :D
thanks! haha yeah :)