finished w.i.p.

[djallalnamri]

salam ... hello ... bonjour everybody
my finished w.i.p. :
http://soundcloud.com/djallalnamri/fight-for-love
enjoy (if possible) and feedback most welcomed

[brandystarbrite]

Aah! You did a longer version of your song. NICE.
As I said before, when you posted the shorter version of the song, very nice song. I really enjoyed listening to this "extended version." Great work!! Applause!
This music would definitely sound good, to play around the Christmas season. Especially for those who celebrate Christmas.
Well in my opinion, it sounds like a Christmas song. He! He! Nice. Now where's my Cocoa?

My only concern, is that this newer version has some slight "crackle sounds in it." Especially at the start up of the song.
And also when the drum plays at 15 or 16 secs, it sounds a bit fuzzy or slightly muffled.
If you compare this version to the previous version you posted, you'll see the difference between the quality. Especially the "drums."
The previous version also sounds Crystal clearer too.
I'm wearing the same headphones that I used, when I listened to the previous version. So I can hear the fuzzyish crackly's.

Don't worry, it could be Sound cloud. Some other users on the Lmms forum posting their songs on sound cloud, mentioned in their posts, that their music sounded low quality, fuzzyish and different, when they uploaded it to Soundcloud.
I don't know what's causing this problem though.

But all in all. Great music. Try to upload the song again. Maybe that'll solve the problem. Great!

[djallalnamri]

hello again and thank you very,very much for quick and extended feedback
well i was not meant to upload it because i knew it needed some sound tweaking especially volume automation ... i spent the whole day trying to use the automation editor but finally gave it up ...
there's something about that tool i ought to know ... whenever i use it i have to scroll from left to right for "miles" ... it would be very nice if we could control block volume instead of whole track ... may be i am wrong ...
again thank you very very much i really appreciate your comments ...

[brandystarbrite]

hello again and thank you very,very much for quick and extended feedback

No problem. I enjoyed it! And glad I could help.

there's something about that tool i ought to know ... whenever i use it i have to scroll from left to right for "miles" ... it would be very nice if we could control block volume instead of whole track ... may be i am wrong ...

Yeah. I wish there was a way to contain or lock it. It does scroll for miles and that can be quite annoying. I'm also new to "Automation editor," so I don't know all the abilities it possesses yet.

again thank you very very much i really appreciate your comments ...

No problem. I'm glad I could help again.

[djallalnamri]

i finally did as you suggested and re-uploaded the song ...
thanks again

[brandystarbrite]

Great! It sounds much better now.
But all in all great job.

[dotsnspots]

I can tell you put a lot of hard work into it.

That electric guitar though... It is not the way you used it... it's just, I really do not like the sound of that guitar.

But I do like the song.

[pauljs75]

there's something about that tool i ought to know ... whenever i use it i have to scroll from left to right for "miles" ... it would be very nice if we could control block volume instead of whole track ... may be i am wrong ...

Yeah. I wish there was a way to contain or lock it. It does scroll for miles and that can be quite annoying. I'm also new to "Automation editor," so I don't know all the abilities it possesses yet.

Did you know that in automation tracks (not the global one - which is difficult anyways), you can place automations as blocks? The measures in those starts from where that block was placed in the song timeline. However keep in mind that each block counts as a separate automation. (So you have to ctrl drag the thing being automated to each block.) If you're doing long complex automations with lots of jumps it's likely you'll still have to do the ridiculoulsy long scroll thing, but for things like fairly short fades just start the blocks where you want them to begin and work within those measures.

Nice little song btw.

[djallalnamri]

I can tell you put a lot of hard work into it.

That electric guitar though... It is not the way you used it... it's just, I really do not like the sound of that guitar.

But I do like the song.

first thank you very very much about feedback ...
secund ... among all guitar vst and soundfonts i have tried it is the only one that for me sounds as a guitar ( it is a zynadd ... bank )

[djallalnamri]

there's something about that tool i ought to know ... whenever i use it i have to scroll from left to right for "miles" ... it would be very nice if we could control block volume instead of whole track ... may be i am wrong ...

Yeah. I wish there was a way to contain or lock it. It does scroll for miles and that can be quite annoying. I'm also new to "Automation editor," so I don't know all the abilities it possesses yet.

Did you know that in automation tracks (not the global one - which is difficult anyways), you can place automations as blocks? The measures in those starts from where that block was placed in the song timeline. However keep in mind that each block counts as a separate automation. (So you have to ctrl drag the thing being automated to each block.) If you're doing long complex automations with lots of jumps it's likely you'll still have to do the ridiculoulsy long scroll thing, but for things like fairly short fades just start the blocks where you want them to begin and work within those measures.

Nice little song btw.

well thank you very veru much for the info ...
i think and this is just an idea ... it would be nice if the automation editor worked the way the virtual piano does ... may be it will be even better if the two tools were merged in one ...
and thank you vey much for nice comment about the song too