Electronic Track

[Noire]

I have been practicing a lot with bass and synth, but am still horrible and slowly improving overtime. I hope you guys enjoy this track.

https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/begin

https://youtu.be/S0m8TKxI75s

[brandystarbrite]

I have been practicing a lot with bass and synth,.......
https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/begin

This sounds, like a Wip mix, of many different, interesting short tracks.
After listening to it, I will admit, it definitely has potential.

I noticed that from the start of the track, some of the beats, sounded a bit deliberately off beat.

The kick drum sounds a bit too weak. EQ'ing the kick sound, might help make it sound, a bit better.
Or, probably change that kick sound, and replace it with another kick sound.

From 2:10 secs onward, this is where I hear, alot of interesting music shorts.

You're starting to get alot better. And this mix of short wip tracks, prove that you're on to something.
So keep improving and keep practicing.

[peefTube Music]

Hmm.. Sounds like a good start. I'd recommend that you keep working on this every day, especially on days when you have some really good inspiration. That's what I do and it's helped me over time. I try to write a piece every day, and it's caused the quality of my music to rise dramatically, in ways I could never have imagined years ago. But either way, this is good considering! Keep it up and you'll go places!!

I can't wait to hear more from you, I can tell there's a lot of potential embedded in these notes!