Not bad at all dude.

But after listening to it like 3 times, I realised, that something is missing from it, more so, in the background area.
Putting a low pad sound of your choice, in the background, can really help, solve that problem.
The
kick drum heard from the start onward, sounds nice, but it sounds a bit weak and needs to sound, a bit more stronger and fuller sounding. Probably, adding some
Eq can help make it sound better.
I also suggest, adding in a few more sounds and effects etc. to make the track, sound more fun and exciting.
Be creative, try to add some fun sound effects, like a
duck sound?

Or any other of your choice.

Enjoy!