Just from hearing the start of the track, I knew I was going to hear, something cool. ^_^
I like those type of bass melodies. I make some in my trance music too.
A good
pad sound, playing in the background, would make this track, sound even more cooler.
It could be my imagination, but from
3:35 to 4:39 secs, that
honky sounding synth melody
that plays in the background, I noticed, that some of the notes, might be a bit off key there.
But overall, this is a good track dude. You're definitely on to something here.
Just a few more improvements, and it'll sound better. Keep it up!