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Just made a piano track
Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2017 12:00 pm
by Kubek0212
Hello there,
I have made my first track in lmms... Ok, not my first, but first which I am proud of.
Piano is the most familiar instrument for me, so I used it as the main melody.
I would be grateful for Your feedback
https://soundcloud.com/user-396015303/7-tones-below
Re: Just made a piano track
Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2017 3:23 pm
by peefTube Music
This is beautiful. Good work
Re: Just made a piano track
Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2017 3:52 pm
by j7h18
Awesome composition and instruments!
Re: Just made a piano track
Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 4:50 pm
by Kalaherty
It sounds good, I like how the lo-fi element comes into it, but ends with the piano section again.
Though are the bass notes on the piano played with the same accent as the melody notes that occur on the same beat? (if that makes sense)... It sounds like the bass notes are softer which is odd for piano or some of the accents feel unnatural,,, I'm probably wrong, but I thought I'd bring it up since it's the best I can do at being "constructive".
Also, what are you using for the piano instrument? It sound pretty good.
But anywho, I like it.
Re: Just made a piano track
Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 4:57 pm
by peefTube Music
Kalaherty wrote: ↑Fri Mar 31, 2017 4:50 pm
Though are the bass notes on the piano played with the same accent as the melody notes that occur on the same beat? (if that makes sense)... It sounds like the bass notes are softer which is odd for piano or some of the accents feel unnatural,,, I'm probably wrong, but I thought I'd bring it up since it's the best I can do at being "constructive".
Actually, as a piano player, I can confirm that the bass notes on piano should almost always be played quieter than the treble notes. There are a few exceptions, of course, but that's usually the general rule, since the right hand (treble) is almost always playing the melody.
Re: Just made a piano track
Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 5:46 pm
by Kalaherty
HA! This is just adds to the reasons why I'm terrible at piano... I do a lot of accenting in unison on my left and right hand....
Re: Just made a piano track
Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2017 4:48 pm
by Kubek0212
Kalaherty wrote: ↑Fri Mar 31, 2017 4:50 pm
It sounds like the bass notes are softer which is odd for piano or some of the accents feel unnatural
Also, what are you using for the piano instrument?
Thanks for Your feedback. The bass line can sound softer, because I used bass booster to increase the difference between the bass and violin lines.
(adding 2 identical ingredients to the same dish is not optimal sollution)
About the instrument, I use this:
http://www.vst4free.com/free_vst.php?pl ... ano&id=971
Mabye not the best, but I like it.
Re: Just made a piano track
Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2017 5:02 pm
by peefTube Music
I could've sworn you were using GeneralUser for the piano XD
Re: Just made a piano track
Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2017 2:11 am
by brandystarbrite
Kubek0212 wrote: ↑Wed Mar 29, 2017 12:00 pm
Hello there,
I have made my first track in lmms... Ok, not my first, but first which I am proud of.
Piano is the most familiar instrument for me, so I used it as the main melody.
I would be grateful for Your feedback
https://soundcloud.com/user-396015303/7-tones-below
This is lovely. And I like the piano melody too.
Tip: The tune, sounds a bit too soft. Just raise up the volume, on the track a tiny bit.
