does this beginning work?

[justmeh]

here's the first part of something I am working on right now. *link deleted*

Would you mind giving it a quick listen and see if it sounds ok to you guys? I've heard it too many times to tell if it is ok anymore.

[mitix98]

Idea is pretty good but that drums, urgh... my ears. Find something better.

[justmeh]

yeah sorry I don't really like them either, but I'm not sure what to do with them. Do you have any suggestions?

[mitix98]

http://the-filmmusic-group.deviantart.c ... -224143947
Check it, our forum friend Exprimamus is using it.
Check out his tracks here to know how it sounds.
https://soundcloud.com/exprimamus
They're really amazing.

[justmeh]

ok thanks mitix

update: so I deleted the old one and I will upload a new one with the drums reworked when I can.

Thanks again