Undertale / Toby Fox - Dummy! (Douglas Remix)

[Douglas]

Here it is:

https://soundcloud.com/douglas-undertal ... ummy-remix

I used ZynAddSubFX to synthesize a PHAT trumpet, it sounds awesome!

Please, tell me what you think.

[noba]

Okay the intro was weird but after reading the comments I see it was intentional.

But, what played after that blew me away! It's amazing! I don't know much in the way of music making, but maybe to make the distortion in the intro less jarring you could have it start to fade out towards the end of the intro?

[Douglas]

Okay the intro was weird but after reading the comments I see it was intentional.

But, what played after that blew me away! It's amazing! I don't know much in the way of music making, but maybe to make the distortion in the intro less jarring you could have it start to fade out towards the end of the intro?

Pretty much every person has complained about the piano... it sounds good to me though

It's sounding like the solution would simply be to not distort the piano... I guess phat > flat isn't true in this case.

Thank you for the feedback!

[noba]

Okay the intro was weird but after reading the comments I see it was intentional.

But, what played after that blew me away! It's amazing! I don't know much in the way of music making, but maybe to make the distortion in the intro less jarring you could have it start to fade out towards the end of the intro?

Pretty much every person has complained about the piano... it sounds good to me though

It's sounding like the solution would simply be to not distort the piano... I guess phat > flat isn't true in this case.

Thank you for the feedback!

No no after realising it was intentional I thought it was alright! Are you going for the sort of idea where it sounds "smaller" till it builds up and gets into the meat of the song? It sort of sounds that way. But I'm just thinking of ways that could stop people from being annoyed while still keeping the 'phat'-ness

[brandystarbrite]

Ahhh! This is good.

I had a suspicion that the noisy sounding piano, at the start was literally deliberate.
That's quite an interesting strategy, to introduce the track with the noisy piano, then
surprise listeners with the cool parts that come afterwards.
I literally understand, what you were going for there. Very creative.

As for the rest of the track, it's really excitingly good.

The bassy sounding part of the tune, reminds me a bit of the tune, in the first old Star Wars film that the aliens play in the bar, when Luke Skywalker, Obi Wan Kenobi and the droids look for Han Solo and Chewybacca.

[Douglas]

Ahhh! This is good.

I had a suspicion that the noisy sounding piano, at the start was literally deliberate.
That's quite an interesting strategy, to introduce the track with the noisy piano, then
surprise listeners with the cool parts that come afterwards.
I literally understand, what you were going for there. Very creative.

As for the rest of the track, it's really excitingly good.

The bassy sounding part of the tune, reminds me a bit of the tune, in the first old Star Wars film that the aliens play in the bar, when Luke Skywalker, Obi Wan Kenobi and the droids look for Han Solo and Chewybacca.

I know what part of Star Wars you are talking about. That is because the bass is a lower version of the main instrument, which is a trumpet I synthesized. I uploaded the preset: https://lmms.io/lsp/?action=show&file=11908

Thank you for your feedback!

[D.Ipsum]

Nice! It's very catchy.