Zooted - J Kidd

[Jbarn]

This one is a work in progress.
Not sure if this is the order I want to deliver the lyrics or not.

Give me some feedback, maybe some ideas.

https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/zooted3

[brandystarbrite]

Nice. Everything sounds good so far.

"Not sure if this is the order I want to deliver the lyrics or not."
Was there something about the line placement of the lyrics, that made you want to sing it
in a different way? Or with the lines changed around?

[D.Ipsum]

https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/zooted3

To continue!

I imagine a more lyrical suite in the way of posing the voice, something coming out of the belly, the guts