The beat in this sounds really good. That I commend you on.
And the bass and volume of the bass sounds good.
Okay: This tune, needs some more mixing, and some of the sounds, need some volume reductions as well. Because some of the sounds in this tune, seem to clip alot. I made some comments on soundcloud, to mark out some of the parts in the tune, that has clipping. The clipping, seems to come from, the scratchy sound.