Trying to make house, but feels like I am failing

[Gps]

Never give up never surrender.

We have a winner.

Feedback as always much appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/digthis

[brandystarbrite]

Never give up never surrender.

We have a winner.

Feedback as always much appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/digthis

This version sounds really nice.
I think the only thing holding it back, is that it needs some punch to it.

[Gps]

Never give up never surrender.

We have a winner.

Feedback as always much appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/digthis

This version sounds really nice.
I think the only thing holding it back, is that it needs some punch to it.

Can you explain what you mean with some punch ?

[brandystarbrite]

Never give up never surrender.

We have a winner.

Feedback as always much appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/digthis

This version sounds really nice.
I think the only thing holding it back, is that it needs some punch to it.

Can you explain what you mean with some punch ?

Sorry for the late reply.
Everything in the track sounds really good, but I noticed that the kick sound, seems a bit too weak and not punchy sounding enough. I'm going to listen to it again, and see if I can figure out a way to solve that.

[brandystarbrite]

Hey Gps, the entire track sounds good. It's just the kick sound lacks a bit.
I think I can make a kick sound, that would go well with this track. Give me a while to make one. This might take some time.

[brandystarbrite]

Know what, leave the kick as it is. Because it sounds nice in this track.
But if you want, I think I might have a kick sound, that might probably fit into this track.
Interested?

[Gps]

Thank you but not for now.

I have seemed to have reached one of those frustrating moments again.

It has to do with mixing, and were it seems easy Q improves the sound, but which I can't reproduce with the build in equalizer of LMMS.

Pretty sure this is a user error though.

[brandystarbrite]

Thank you but not for now.

I have seemed to have reached one of those frustrating moments again.

It has to do with mixing, and were it seems easy Q improves the sound, but which I can't reproduce with the build in equalizer of LMMS.

Pretty sure this is a user error though.

I understand.
But to be honest, you really reached far with this track. Just figure out the mixing part, and you're 100% there. You're like 98% close already.

[brandystarbrite]

Or this one, the vocals are not really dominant the groove is though.
Solitaire - I´m Thinking Of You (Extended Club Mix)

I actually spent over 15 minutes, trying to find this topic and this song, that you posted on page 3 of this topic, where we had a discussion about it. Strangely, I had to listen to it again, after remembering Daft Punk again.

[Gps]

Its definitely close to disco.