First Track I Made Thus Far

[halfbreathin]

https://soundcloud.com/user-584199901/the-introduction

Since I'm still very new to the program, any tips are welcome! thanks!

[brandystarbrite]

https://soundcloud.com/user-584199901/the-introduction

Since I'm still very new to the program, any tips are welcome! thanks!

This is quite an interestingly, unusual tune.
Okay, the start up from 0 to 24 secs, needs a tiny volume raise.

The piano part from 24 secs onward, is a tiny bit loud.
But that same piano melody, sounds very nice and clear. Lots of points for that.

What I find interesting, is the fact that there is a strange piano melody playing and it's raining too.
A bit of a scary, ghostly vibe there.

Also, welcome to the forums dude.

[JazzFan9983]

Good start! I agree with the comment on the SoundCloud page though - it would be better if the various tracks worked together more rather than "fighting each other" as they put it.