Soundcloud account updated

[D.Ipsum]

Hy !

I updated my Soundcloud account with some work in progress : https://soundcloud.com/dipsum

I move slowly, but surely (I have too much track to finish )

Any type of feedback (design, composition, arrangement, rhythm, melody, mix, etc.) is more than welcome, it would help me a lot.

Thank you ... and you too

[brandystarbrite]

Don't forget to put the link, so everyone can find it.

[StrawbearyJams]

Hy !

I updated my Soundcloud account with some work in progress (see my signature below).

I move slowly, but surely (I have too much track to finish )

Any type of feedback (design, composition, arrangement, rhythm, melody, mix, etc.) is more than welcome, it would help me a lot.

Thank you ... and you too

Hey there D.Ipsum!

0029_14-1_Orage - Interesting style, reminds me of a cross between something from a video game/the intro the Breaking Bad.

0058_05-3_ I really like all the ambient sounds coming through in this one! This absolutely one of my favorites man. However, I feel like it needs something to fill it out. Maybe something you can fix with eq/volumes, or adding another instrument. Overall I really love this one. Great job!

0094_02-3_Honey - Another good one! There are a few places, ex. 0:32, almost sounds like clipping to me, but it could be the kick. Speaking of the kick, it needs some low end. Having only high end on kick makes it sound like clipping to me; in beat clipping though haha. The instrument in the beginning sounds great, in the beginning. When used in tandem with other notes, it can almost sound clashing in places. This is all my opinion though, everyone's got one. What may sound one way to me, may sound different to someone else. Over all, I like where this track is going, its a good one, but I think it could be great.

0146_01-1_Illusion Of Control - Man, your beat skills are showcased here, my friend! (I need to get on your level! ) Toms may be a bit loud though, but that may just be my personal preference. This is an amazing track man. No real complaints at all. You're a monster at beats with all the little ambient sounds here and there! AMAZING!

0149_00-1_ - Again, awesome beats man. I like the almost jazzy bit in the there as well! Keep adding stuff!

0167_00-1_ - I dig it! There's one static sound that's a little too loud, I believe.


This is as far as I have time currently to listen! I'll edit and do the rest later tonight or tomorrow!

[D.Ipsum]

Don't forget to put the link, so everyone can find it.

Thank you, I put the link more prominently.


0029_14-1_Orage
The title "Orage" means "Thunderstorm". I still have work to do to heighten the atmosphere, but I'm a bit blocked (since 2014 ...).


0058_05-3_

I feel like it needs something to fill it out

It's fun because I thought the same way: this track seems a little empty. Also, someone said "well built, but it sounds cheap!". And I have to admit he's right, it sounds cheap. So I still have work!


0094_02-3_Honey

There are a few places, ex. 0:32, almost sounds like clipping to me, but it could be the kick.

Yes, I also thought that this click came from the kick, but that's not it, it's worse, it comes from the Monstro, and I have not yet found the solution to this problem.

Speaking of the kick, it needs some low end. Having only high end on kick makes it sound like clipping to me; in beat clipping though haha.

Okay, I'll do some testing on it.

The instrument in the beginning sounds great, in the beginning. When used in tandem with other notes, it can almost sound clashing in places.

That is true. In addition, it is copied / pasted throughout the track. I'll do some tests on that as well.


0146_01-1_Illusion Of Control -

Toms may be a bit loud though

Yes, the volumes lack balance, and I also want to bring rhythmic variations to avoid the monotony of repetition.


0167_00-1_

There's one static sound that's a little too loud, I believe.

Bass sound in the background (which is present from beginning to end)?

This is as far as I have time currently to listen! I'll edit and do the rest later tonight or tomorrow!

Anyway, thank you very much StrawbearyJams for all! I keep your comments carefully in my notebook. I am motivated now!