Feedback Appreciated

[RWalsh]

This song is a work in progress.
I'm hoping to get some good constructive criticism here, no bs

https://soundcloud.com/user-64509083/focus2/s-CXxkz

[D.Ipsum]

Nice, it's gone.

Maybe you could add an intro, which would not be overloaded with instruments, something lighter.

I like the interlaced melodies.

I like the punctuation of the kick at 00m48 (followed by the little silence). After a dense part, this allows you to breathe.

[TvHead]

I like where the song is headed! Though, there are just a couple things I would like to point out.

-The beginning came in a bit too hard for me. It was sudden with the amount of instruments, but some songs are meant to be this way. If you were to tweak the beginning a little bit, this would be a great start.

-I sensed a bit of repetition. I heard a lot of the same thing for a little bit of time. The first half was what made me notice this. The second half was quite different in parts.

All in all, it's a good start. I hope you gain some more attention when you finish this song, because I think others will enjoy it.

[brandystarbrite]

Good short track, with alot of energy.

I agree that the start up was too sudden.
As one poster suggest, an nice intro would do this track well.

Personally, I don't find this track too repetitive.

[D.Ipsum]

For the repetitive side of which TvHead speaks, this may be regulated by automation (e.g. filter, EQ, other effect, or certain parameters of your instruments such as volume, envelope DAHDSR, etc.).

This solution would apply to the parts that are repeated, changing only the sound, not the notes.