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D.Ipsum » Tue Aug 29, 2017 3:19 pm
Nice!
I agree with simplework, there is a balance problem.
The arpeggio which appears at the beginning and which is superimposed on the chords lacks a little volume.
I suppose that to record the voice, you have limited means. But I could not advise anything about recording techniques.
Yes, the volume of the lead synth that appears in the chorus after your voice is too loud compared with the rest.
The drums lack volume, I perceive them with difficulty.
Clearly, you can improve the mix. I think the composition is fine. Maybe the end point is a little neglected.
He he, the visual reminds me that I'm cold (late winter)