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I put this one together for the challenge, I hope you all enjoy listening to it as much as I did making it!

https://clyp.it/xxgnoqcj

https://soundcloud.com/freedivide/futur ... -challenge

Good sound tune

But lead sounds too loud.

Nice!

I agree with simplework, there is a balance problem.

The arpeggio which appears at the beginning and which is superimposed on the chords lacks a little volume.
I suppose that to record the voice, you have limited means. But I could not advise anything about recording techniques.
Yes, the volume of the lead synth that appears in the chorus after your voice is too loud compared with the rest.
The drums lack volume, I perceive them with difficulty.

Clearly, you can improve the mix. I think the composition is fine. Maybe the end point is a little neglected.

He he, the visual reminds me that I'm cold (late winter)

Okay, in all honesty, this track sounds really cool man.

But: There's a bit of dipping volumes and raising volumes in this track.
The singing from 28 to 52 secs, and from 1:50 to 2:00 secs sounds a bit too quiet
and gets quieter after a while. A small volume raise is needed there.

I noticed, that the the singing gets louder, from 53 secs.
I suggest a small build up type drum roll, before, the singing starts to get louder, from the 53 sec mark.
Doing that, will help transition the lower vocals, to the louder vocals more smoothly.