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Posted: **Wed Oct 11, 2017 1:11 pm**

So I made this track:
https://soundcloud.com/user-64509083/contrast-3/s-vBLOQ

any input would be appreciated

Posted: **Wed Oct 11, 2017 8:47 pm**

Pretty good. A few parts here and there that I liked. Personally, I would have preferred it to be a little bit shorter but it's still a pretty cool track.

Posted: **Wed Oct 11, 2017 10:43 pm**

Very exciting track! I like the little details, there is a lot to listen to. The use of the effects is also good. Transitions between the different parts work well.

I would also say it's a bit long. But maybe it's because I'm tired ...

Is this still a WIP?

Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2017 2:25 am**

This is a really energetic track you got here. From start to finish.

For a long tune, all of those various melodies and melody changes, kept the tune fresh
and going in an exciting direction. Not many people, can do that successfully.
And the entire tune, had enough coolness, to keep my interest, the entire time.
So good work there.

Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2017 1:06 pm**

D.Ipsum wrote: ↑
Wed Oct 11, 2017 10:43 pm
Very exciting track! I like the little details, there is a lot to listen to. The use of the effects is also good. Transitions between the different parts work well.

I would also say it's a bit long. But maybe it's because I'm tired ...

Is this still a WIP?

not really, I'm just working around mastering. but if there's any specific parts you think are boring, I really would want to spice them up with maybe a pad, rhythmic gates, or filter automation..

Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2017 1:17 pm**

brandystarbrite wrote: ↑
Thu Oct 12, 2017 2:25 am
This is a really energetic track you got here. From start to finish.
For a long tune, all of those various melodies and melody changes, kept the tune fresh
and going in an exciting direction. Not many people, can do that successfully.
And the entire tune, had enough coolness, to keep my interest, the entire time.
So good work there.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I did making it

I usually make shorter tracks but I just couldn't stop with this one XD

Posted: **Fri Oct 13, 2017 12:54 am**

RWalsh wrote: ↑
Thu Oct 12, 2017 1:06 pm

D.Ipsum wrote: ↑
Wed Oct 11, 2017 10:43 pm
Very exciting track! I like the little details, there is a lot to listen to. The use of the effects is also good. Transitions between the different parts work well.

I would also say it's a bit long. But maybe it's because I'm tired ...

Is this still a WIP?
not really, I'm just working around mastering. but if there's any specific parts you think are boring, I really would want to spice them up with maybe a pad, rhythmic gates, or filter automation..

I found it a bit long, but I can not identify what makes me say that.
In any case, I was seduced from the start.

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