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My First Song
Posted: July 14th, 2019, 4:13 pm
by obnoxify
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 17th, 2019, 5:21 am
by brandystarbrite
Alright! Rad beat dude!
Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the
vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 17th, 2019, 11:30 am
by Incorruptable
Its powerful,
Correct me if i am wrong, but i think this style of music and the lyrical content would be frowned on in your country, is that who the lyrics are aimed at? The current ruling elite in Pakistan?
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 20th, 2019, 1:52 pm
by obnoxify
brandystarbrite wrote: ↑July 17th, 2019, 5:21 am
Alright! Rad beat dude!
Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the
vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Thank you
. What do you feel like I could do to improve them?
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 20th, 2019, 6:14 pm
by Anonymouqs
The intro makes me feel so C H I L L
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 20th, 2019, 7:17 pm
by DJB
It's chill, but the vocals in the chorus need to be brought out more, and you need more variation in the hi-hats. Other than that, it's pretty good!
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 21st, 2019, 4:06 pm
by obnoxify
Incorruptable wrote: ↑July 17th, 2019, 11:30 am
Its powerful,
Correct me if i am wrong, but i think this style of music and the lyrical content would be frowned on in your country, is that who the lyrics are aimed at? The current ruling elite in Pakistan?
Yep, on point. I'm the outcast lmao
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 21st, 2019, 4:12 pm
by obnoxify
Anonymouqs wrote: ↑July 20th, 2019, 6:14 pm
The intro makes me feel so
C H I L L
ayy.
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 21st, 2019, 4:17 pm
by obnoxify
DJB wrote: ↑July 20th, 2019, 7:17 pm
It's chill, but the vocals in the chorus need to be brought out more, and you need more variation in the hi-hats. Other than that, it's pretty good!
Ty. Will do that. Just getting into mixing so feedback is really appreciated
Re: My First Song
Posted: July 23rd, 2019, 4:25 am
by brandystarbrite
obnoxify wrote: ↑July 20th, 2019, 1:52 pm
brandystarbrite wrote: ↑July 17th, 2019, 5:21 am
Alright! Rad beat dude!
Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the
vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Thank you
. What do you feel like I could do to improve them?
Try using one of lmms'
equalizer plugins on the vocals.
Play around with the dials, and turn the dials anyway you want, until the vocals sound nice, clearer, and punchy enough for your style.