My song needs a feedback

[Tobi_Maguar]

Hi guys,
My friend was created a song on LMMS. Please listen it, what you think about it?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1LIqcHD7fqk

[coburn37]

It started off alright, sort of an epic drum, large room orchestral type piece. Took an unexpected turn at 0:20 for the original tone I got from the song. I liked this section though. There's the pad/organ in the background that lays down a nice background but also pushes into the song at times and goes back out that I like. Another weird distorted sort of guitar sounding synth that I really enjoyed.

There was one instrument from the 0:20 on that just never seemed to be in key though. My only major gripe with the song. I did like the cut up/sampled voice portion but the lyrics were a little plain and kind of hard to make out what was being said.

[musikbear]

You only used lmms for the track?
Impressive i would say.
Careful with use of other peeps vids, though -especially on yt !
If this vid went viral, you could look at serious claims for each of the imagery pieces that you have used.

[Tobi_Maguar]

You only used lmms for the track?
Impressive i would say.
Careful with use of other peeps vids, though -especially on yt !
If this vid went viral, you could look at serious claims for each of the imagery pieces that you have used.

Thanks for feedback!

Those vids are royalty free from

https://videos.pexels.com/

[Tobi_Maguar]

You only used lmms for the track?

Yes, LMMS only and little Ardour. But use many VSTi plugins with LMMS too.