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Hey Guys!
I am new in the forum so I'd like to ask you about a part of a song that I made a few days ago.
Any suggestions for improvement?

Here is the song (Soundcloud):
https://soundcloud.com/acydemusic/song-idea-1

Thx

What genre are you attempting to make?

I don't really know
I wanted to make only a different song and don't care about what genre it has.
But what genre would you take?

Well I would say drumstep if it had less simple percussion

Do you know OVERWERK?
I like his music very much and I'd like to make orchestral electro/complextro too!
I tried to make such a song, but I failed
Do you know any tips or so?

The instruments are good and powerful and it is well mixed (I can't hear any rattling or unwanted distortion). At the moment it is maybe a bit repetitive and there are not so many instruments playing. I would personally add a few more instruments in and make the drum pattern a bit more "complicated" and maybe add a bit of panning (portamento might be interesting?). However some people like more repetitive music than I do, so it depends what you like. I like most the small glitch at 0:44 and when the extra drums come on at 0:58 and the good sounds you are using in your song. All in all it's still definately a well made song and I'm not really an expert myself :p

Thanks!
I try to make it a bit complicated.
Well it's my second Song
Anyway i try for my next Song a bit of orchestral and electro like OVERWERK.
Thx

All users can post suggestions
I am looking forward to it

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I think it is a very good first draft to a track!
especially the second part is good, and sounds nicely 'housy'
First part could need more work, and there is some disharmony around 0:22

Thanks!
Yeah i will make this song a bit more complicated and I will look at this part of the song that has disharmony.