I can't figure out how this should end. Any help?

[Foggy]

I've been messing around with this track for entirely too long (like three years maybe), and I can't figure out how to make it stop. I want to put it on an album I've been working on (sort of a concept album about post-apocalyptic robots), but it needs a lot of work. I'm hoping that if I can figure out how to end it I can flesh out the bits in between. Any advice?

https://soundcloud.com/spugintrntl/hend ... y2/s-otPUL

[musikbear]

i think i understand exactly what you mean, but Im not sure you will like this to much, because imo the problem with how to end the track is related to: 1) the track length. 2) the repetitive nature of each part. 3) the length of each part.
That is the 'reason' that you do not reach a 'natual end'. What i think would improve the track, was to make each part shorter, so the whole track comes down to ~4 mins. I would make it more interesting to listen to, and the repetitive nature would not be so obvious.
well that imo.

[Foggy]

Sound advice, thanks! Never occurred to me probably because most of my other compositions thus far have been composed in mostly the same way and I never really had much of an issue with them... but this does make a lot of sense. Thanks for the help!