A new remix. Input wanted!

[SonicSpeed]

Decided to remix/remake M.O.O.N. - Dust from HM2 in LMMS.
Here is the track: https://soundcloud.com/supersonic-music ... lmms-remix
I would appreciate the criticism.

[brandystarbrite]

I'm liking this remix, even though I've never heard the original.
The synth from the start of the track, sounds very asian sounding.
I must admit, this track has an unusual, yet surreal sound and feel to it.
Nice fade out as the track ends.

The hard hitting snare sound, is nice, but sounds a slight bit too loudy. Lower it down a tiny bit.
Or, if you're using the Audio File Processor, select low pass or other etc. and turn the Freq dial.
Your choice.

But overall, nice remix dude. It sounds cool.
This gets my star of approval.

PS: Oh my gosh! The cover art! Gasp!! A tough guy chicken dude!! He! He!

[SonicSpeed]

I'm liking this remix, even though I've never heard the original.
The synth from the start of the track, sounds very asian sounding.
I must admit, this track has an unusual, yet surreal sound and feel to it.
Nice fade out as the track ends.

The hard hitting snare sound, is nice, but sounds a slight bit too loudy. Lower it down a tiny bit.
Or, if you're using the Audio File Processor, select low pass or other etc. and turn the Freq dial.
Your choice.

But overall, nice remix dude. It sounds cool.
This gets my star of approval.
PS: Oh my gosh! The cover art! Gasp!! A tough guy chicken dude!! He! He!

Thanks, I updated it in my Miami EP.
Also, if you'd know who that "tough guy chicken dude" is, then you probably won't be laughing.
Hotline Miami is an awesome franchise and I recommend you to check it out.

[prfukup]

This has the makings of a Hotline Miami song, just would want to hear it change more.