My first track with vocals

[TobyMorgan96]

Just released a song I've been working on for a while featuring vocals from one of my friends. Hope you enjoy and feedback would be appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/toby_morgan/todays-pine

[musikbear]

The song is lovely! You have a lot of crackles, especially in the beginning. Crackles can occour for a lot of reasons, but one is too high volume in one instrument part, eg ignoring the volume setting in mixer and turning a volume dial on a preset very high. Im afraid that this issue is a real problem in lmms, especially with SDL setting. Where did you mix the song? Audacity? There is slight tendency to a 'bathroom' wibe where a minute metallic room sound is in the mix. Well all imo :)

[brandystarbrite]

Very lovely music track. It has a haunting feel to it.
Oh, I heard a few crackles too.
All in all, good job to all of you, on this track, because it's very nice.

[Gideon Stephen]

I like it