First future bass style track/remix; feedback appreciated

[s2_]

Hey guys, I need some help to polish up my skills

I would really appreciate any advice you have for me

soundcloud.com/dx5

[musikbear]

Hey guys

Hi -Welcome to the forum s2_! First, For you, all important links:
http://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=4740
And a few rules for Avatars, signatures, posting and using the right sub-forum :)

You forgot a link to your song :)
Bot, You can also use the soundcloud grp you find in above link collection. There you get more reviews, i think

[mrlmmsguy]

Bot, You can also use the soundcloud grp you find in above link collection. There you get more reviews, i think

SoundCloud groups are going away in four days (8/22/16), so maybe not

[brandystarbrite]

Hey guys, I need some help to polish up my skills

I would really appreciate any advice you have for me

soundcloud.com/dx5

A link to your tracks will be nice.
We shall wait.