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brandystarbrite Online
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Fri Aug 19, 2016 11:46 pm
Good track.
Okay, well the
clap sounds a bit weak. Either add a
calf reverb to it and experiment from there, or use
a better clap sound. Or, record your own clappy sound.
Also, the
kick drum should a bit stronger.
On the good side:
Nice melodies. You did a good bit of melody variations in this track.
Something tells me, you had fun making all those melody variations.
Overall, a nice track dude.
What I noticed, is that this track needs something
extra, to make it sound more exciting.
But I have no idea what it is.
PS: Don't worry dude. I read where you said the track is
unmastered. That's why I didn't give much advice.
And nice to see you back on the Lmms forums
Minkovsky.
