New Song: "Big Bruise"

[Jogden139]

https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-ogden/big-bruise

Feebly approaching listen-able.. ? hope you enjoy it and comments/constructive criticism welcomed!

[brandystarbrite]

https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-ogden/big-bruise

Feebly approaching listen-able.. ? hope you enjoy it and comments/constructive criticism welcomed!

The start up of the track, sounded like something from the 80's.

The hihat sound from 30 secs to 1:31 secs is not in time with the rest of the track.
The same with the hihats that play after 2:27 secs.

Nice change of pace from 1:32 secs to 2:26 secs though.

The good news with this song, is that solving the problems in this track, is sorta simple.
Just get the hihats in time, with the rest of the track and make minor adjustments to any melody etc.
that is out of sync in the music. And this track will be extremely listenable.
Probably, use this track as a practice test.

Wooah! That is one interesting voice sound, I'm hearing.

[Jogden139]

https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-ogden/big-bruise

Feebly approaching listen-able.. ? hope you enjoy it and comments/constructive criticism welcomed!

The start up of the track, sounded like something from the 80's.

The hihat sound from 30 secs to 1:31 secs is not in time with the rest of the track.
The same with the hihats that play after 2:27 secs.

Nice change of pace from 1:32 secs to 2:26 secs though.

The good news with this song, is that solving the problems in this track, is sorta simple.
Just get the hihats in time, with the rest of the track and make minor adjustments to any melody etc.
that is out of sync in the music. And this track will be extremely listenable.
Probably, use this track as a practice test.

Wooah! That is one interesting voice sound, I'm hearing.

yeah i'm not sure why that hihats are like that, Which interesting voice sound?

[brandystarbrite]

yeah i'm not sure why that hihats are like that, Which interesting voice sound?

The synth sound type voice, from 38 to 43 secs.

[Jogden139]

yeah i'm not sure why that hihats are like that, Which interesting voice sound?

The synth sound type voice, from 38 to 43 secs.

oh it's likely just random luck noize, I play off that..