Think your song as a story. It needs to kinda come around to a point where the beginning and middle made sense. Looking at your song editor you introduce an instrument and then never use it again. This is okay if it's a minor sound (an effect or something of that sort) but this is more like a character that is revealed to have cancer, but then the cancer is never talked about again and becomes irrelevant. Yeah.. so repetition is what makes music good and catchy. This is more like a journey that is going nowhere. I would suggest you to read about popular song structures: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Song_structure http://subaqueousmusic.com/dubstep-and-electronic-music-song-structure/ You might think that you're being innovative or something and that you want to break boundaries, but in reality even music has some rules... Posted by: Squatro  on 2017-03-02 15:24:34

hahahahahaha this song make me laugh i dont know why i cannot hear the kick drum i listen.........................but no kick maybe my ears gettin old from listen to rubbish on lmms 90% who knows but i am glad 10% sounds good Posted by: lgbt  on 2017-03-08 14:21:31