There once was a boy with a dog and a cat The cat said 'meow' and the dog went 'woof'; they were very good at that Day and night he spent in a station where he was working at He was just a rookie, but was greeted with a welcome mat He tried to make songs in A, yet always ended in G-flat but luckily the brat had a dog and a cat So the cat said 'meow' and the dog went 'woof' They were very good at that and there's plenty of proof Posted by: Squatro  on 2017-09-25 19:41:01

I hope that you like this little poem :) Posted by: Squatro  on 2017-09-25 19:41:59

@Squatro I don't get the point lol Posted by: vespertine  on 2017-09-25 19:45:49

@squatro i know what your poem is getting at, good poem. Posted by: DJFlyingPankakez  on 2017-09-25 19:55:39

Nice poem, @Squatro, althought I must ask, what's the flow? It's certainly not da-Dum, da-Dum, da-dum for each verse, but I'm afraid I can't see it. :( Posted by: Etorna_Z  on 2017-09-25 20:39:32

the melodic key is tripping me out but this is great lol Posted by: XcaliburLord  on 2017-09-25 22:55:29

yeah dude fix the key and this would be a bit more pleasant to the ear ah :/ Posted by: XcaliburLord  on 2017-09-25 22:58:06

Not bad for the first time, but you need sidechain ^^ Posted by: AKrys  on 2017-09-26 09:40:08

@Vespertine Haha, someone must really like all of your projects and hate everything else on this platform. I was gone for a while and when I came back I noticed that your project got 4 good ratings and every other project on the front page got 3-4 bad ratings. Weird how it works. Posted by: Squatro  on 2017-09-26 12:00:45

@Squatro Yeah this is indeed really weird. I can't imagine who'd like all of my projects :D Posted by: vespertine  on 2017-09-26 12:53:39

@Vespertine Haha, that's like so le random XD You know I wish there was a way to like look at the stats of this website so see every rating every account has ever made in the history of this website... I wish that like...the dev of this website would check that... Posted by: Squatro  on 2017-09-26 17:20:09

@Squatro I would prefer some kind of communication page on here, like this is a real social network! Posted by: vespertine  on 2017-09-26 18:25:46

it is a bit off key but luvvv the vocal chops future bass is life <3 Posted by: ash  on 2017-09-27 18:55:08

no variations at all. also the a part of the chops are offkey, please make your own vocal chops. Posted by: sepctictank  on 2017-09-28 14:43:51