This could also be considered a cover of "Nalin and Kane - Open Your Eyes.". It still needs a lot of work to be a full cover but there's lots in there that might help others.
EDIT: Oh, I forgot to mention that you should routinely pull back the reverb on stock instruments. They will create a muddy sounds pretty quickly when they are added together. ZynSubAddFX can be particularly daunting considering the interface, but you can still do it. It will either be shown directly as an effect when you edit the instrument or you will have to cycle through the effect list using the arrows. You can also drill into the effect s by: Show GUI- > Edit Instrument -> Effects -> Move the FX No. Arrow until you find the "REVERB", from there you can dial it down. Often "Chorus" or something else is the first effect. This is what happens when engineers design UI/UX, what else can I say (other than sorry).